let's speak english

Delphine · Sujet: Re: let's speak english Mer 29 Mar 2006 - 13:37

I'm sorry but i don't speak english Sad

Dorot · Sujet: Re: let's speak english Mer 29 Mar 2006 - 14:35

Oh, this so bad!

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**No0'** · Sujet: Re: let's speak english Mer 29 Mar 2006 - 14:48

Yes , I think that too ...

But you speak english a little , no ?

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**Auzzy**

Yelllloowwww Razz

It's me, again =)

Who could to correct this text, it's a film summary:

We are in a stadium, the Jules' team coachs her. Jesse meets the team's coach, but he don't seems to take Jesse in the team (ici, j'voulais dire que l'entraineur n'était pas trés enthousiasmé par l'idée de la prendre dans l'équipe ).
Finally, at the entrainnement's end, Jesse is accept.

Later, Jesse is in her bedroom (decorated with a Beckham posters), and thinks to Jules, who is lucky, because her parents let to play the footbal.
But at Jules' home, the father and him daughter play to football, in a garden. The Mother dislikes that her daughter practises the football, she prefers that Jules makes a shopping, interresses at boys ...

Thx you, in advance Smile

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**No0'**

This is very Rolling Eyes

*hum* interesting ^^'

I'm sorry but I have a lot homework today ! And I have to learn my lecon for tomorow ^^ .

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**Audrey** · Modérateur. Nombre de messages: 2621 Age: 20 Date d'inscription: 03/04/2006

Umm, i think there are a few mistakes :s

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**Auzzy**

No', don't make fun of me, pleasssseeee xD

Thanks Audrey, but where are my few mistakes Razz

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**Audrey** · Modérateur. Nombre de messages: 2621 Age: 20 Date d'inscription: 03/04/2006

especially the expressions, you see ?

wait i try.

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**Audrey** · Modérateur. Nombre de messages: 2621 Age: 20 Date d'inscription: 03/04/2006

Auzzy a écrit:

Yelllloowwww Razz

It's me, again =)

Who could to correct this text, it's a film summary:

We are in a stadium, the Jules' team coachs her. Jesse meets the team's coach, but he don't seems to take Jesse in the team (ici, j'voulais dire que l'entraineur n'était pas trés enthousiasmé par l'idée de la prendre dans l'équipe ).
Finally, at the entrainnement's end, Jesse is accept.

Later, Jesse is in her bedroom (decorated with a Beckham posters), and thinks to Jules, who is lucky, because her parents let to play the footbal.
But at Jules' home, the father and him daughter play to football, in a garden. The Mother dislikes that her daughter practises the football, she prefers that Jules makes a shopping, interresses at boys ...

Thx you, in advance Smile

Jesse is accepted...

Auzzy a écrit:

Yelllloowwww Razz

It's me, again =)

Who could to correct this text, it's a film summary:

We are in a stadium, the Jules' team coachs her. Jesse meets the team's coach, but he don't seems to take Jesse in the team (ici, j'voulais dire que l'entraineur n'était pas trés enthousiasmé par l'idée de la prendre dans l'équipe ).
Finally, at the entrainnement's end, Jesse is accept.

Later, Jesse is in her bedroom (decorated with a Beckham posters), and thinks to Jules, who is lucky, because her parents let to play the footbal.
But at Jules' home, the father and him daughter play to football, in a garden. The Mother dislikes that her daughter practises the football, she prefers that Jules makes a shopping, interresses at boys ...

Thx you, in advance Smile

Perhaps : he doesn't seem to want to take Jesse in the team..
( Il ne semble pas vouloir prendre Jesse dans l'équipe ça te va ça ? )

Auzzy a écrit:

Yelllloowwww Razz

It's me, again =)

Who could to correct this text, it's a film summary:

We are in a stadium, the Jules' team coachs her. Jesse meets the team's coach, but he don't seems to take Jesse in the team (ici, j'voulais dire que l'entraineur n'était pas trés enthousiasmé par l'idée de la prendre dans l'équipe ).
Finally, at the entrainnement's end, Jesse is accept.

Later, Jesse is in her bedroom (decorated with a Beckham posters), and thinks to Jules, who is lucky, because her parents let to play the footbal.
But at Jules' home, the father and him daughter play to football, in a garden. The Mother dislikes that her daughter practises the football, she prefers that Jules makes a shopping, interresses at boys ...

Thx you, in advance Smile

The father and his daughter play to football, in the garden.

Auzzy a écrit:

Yelllloowwww Razz

It's me, again =)

Who could to correct this text, it's a film summary:

We are in a stadium, the Jules' team coachs her. Jesse meets the team's coach, but he don't seems to take Jesse in the team (ici, j'voulais dire que l'entraineur n'était pas trés enthousiasmé par l'idée de la prendre dans l'équipe ).
Finally, at the entrainnement's end, Jesse is accept.

Later, Jesse is in her bedroom (decorated with a Beckham posters), and thinks to Jules, who is lucky, because her parents let to play the footbal.
But at Jules' home, the father and him daughter play to football, in a garden. The Mother dislikes that her daughter practises the football, she prefers that Jules makes a shopping, interresses at boys ...

Thx you, in advance Smile

what do you want to mean when you say this ?

Auzzy a écrit:

Yelllloowwww Razz

It's me, again =)

Who could to correct this text, it's a film summary:

We are in a stadium, the Jules' team coachs her. Jesse meets the team's coach, but he don't seems to take Jesse in the team (ici, j'voulais dire que l'entraineur n'était pas trés enthousiasmé par l'idée de la prendre dans l'équipe ).
Finally, at the entrainnement's end, Jesse is accept.

Later, Jesse is in her bedroom (decorated with a Beckham posters), and thinks to Jules, who is lucky, because her parents let to play the footbal.
But at Jules' home, the father and him daughter play to football, in a garden. The Mother dislikes that her daughter practises the football, she prefers that Jules makes a shopping, interresses at boys ...

Thx you, in advance Smile

I'm don't sure but, i don't think that its correct :s

rather : interested at boys ( i think its that )

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**Auzzy**

Wahhou, thank you for this correction, thank you so muuuuch =)

Audrey a écrit:

Auzzy a écrit:

Later, Jesse is in her bedroom (decorated with a Beckham posters), and thinks to Jules, who is lucky, because her parents let to play the footbal.

Thx you, in advance Smile

what do you want to mean when you say this ?

"That the Jules' parents leave her play the football"

I know that my english was and is always so bad =p

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**Audrey** · Modérateur. Nombre de messages: 2621 Age: 20 Date d'inscription: 03/04/2006

Her parents lets she play footbal. : perhaps, i'm not sure for this sentence :s !

No Problem, with pleasure Smile

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Flm.

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**Auzzy**

I have 16/20, so very thanks youuuuu Very Happy

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**Audrey** · Modérateur. Nombre de messages: 2621 Age: 20 Date d'inscription: 03/04/2006

16/20 ? YES Really Good ! Congratulations ! cheers

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Dorot

Congratulations too Very Happy

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